“He said he wished he’d written a book about the CIA. He felt the CIA was terribly corrupting our democracy.”
Excellent. Some copy nits:
a double “served as” in the 2nd graf
further down, “the historian refused never dared”
Drat; fixed and thx. (The greatest peril of self-publishing are the annoying typos. The eye doesn't catch them as easily in one's own copy.)
One "and" should have been an "as." Pity. How to catch such stuff...
Excellent. Some copy nits:
a double “served as” in the 2nd graf
further down, “the historian refused never dared”
Drat; fixed and thx. (The greatest peril of self-publishing are the annoying typos. The eye doesn't catch them as easily in one's own copy.)
One "and" should have been an "as." Pity. How to catch such stuff...